Nampa, Idaho - October 10, 2026 - An excerpt from the introduction of Better Off:
“Stop staring at them!” She had to shout over the heavy bass and thumping drums emanating from a stack of industrial-grade amplifiers surrounding the stage.
“I can’t help it!” He, too, had to shout over the music.
She pulled on his shirt sleeve like an admonishing mother and bellowed, “You’re letting them affect your evening, which is ruining mine!”
He pulled his arm away from her and shouted, “I’m sorry! It’s freaking mesmerizing to me, and at the same time, deeply disturbing!”
At 40, Cameron wasn’t one to attend concerts anymore, but Bon Jovi was a favorite of his on-again, off-again girlfriend Becca. They both liked the band, beginning in the mid-80s when their debut song, “Runaway,” became an overnight staple on every FM radio station across the country. His eyes drifted back to the foursome sitting five or six rows in front of him. Stadium-style seating gave Cameron a bird’s-eye view of the three young ladies and a young man who appeared to be the boyfriend of one of the phone-wielding girls. While his 20-something-year-old girlfriend texted and the other two filmed themselves reacting to the concert, he sat motionless, except for an occasional knee slap or head bob. Cameron sighed deeply. Four people came to the concert together, and yet each of them is having a separate experience from the other three. That’s crazy!
Despite Becca’s disapproving glare, Cameron continued surveying the crowd in front of him. While his and Becca’s phones were neatly tucked away in her car, he realized that the majority of the concertgoers were holding theirs, especially the women, no matter their age. Many were busy taking pictures and videos while others scrunched down in their seats, pecking away on their phones with both thumbs. From his superior vantage point, Cameron had a clear view of what was illuminated on several dozen screens bobbing in front of him, which, not surprisingly, were connected to social media sites like Facebook, Instagram, Snapchat, TikTok, Messenger, WhatsApp, etc. If their phones weren’t dialed into social media, they were displaying the telltale screens of an Android or iPhone texting app. Cameron shook his head in disbelief. I can still remember when people actually talked to other people with their phones. The world is freaking upside down!
“Oh my god. Look over there,” said Cameron, gesturing toward a woman with yellow cornrows and long pink fingernails. “Now I’ve seen everything.”
Becca didn’t even try to mask her annoyance. “Really, Cam? I don’t know where you are, but I’m at a concert.”
Becca had a right to be exasperated. Bon Jovi didn’t come to the Pacific Northwest very often; plus, they were in the middle of playing “You Give Love a Bad Name.” The irony of the song title did not escape Cameron. Still, his attention was drawn to the woman in question, who was holding a selfie stick with one hand while the other waved around her face. Her phone, of course, was attached to the business end of the telescoping wand with a luminous ring light encircling it. Although his girlfriend was ignoring him, Cameron leaned toward her and said, “If you think I’m a terrible person to attend a concert with, take a look at that selfish lady with the ring light to your right. You literally can’t miss her.”
Cameron didn’t wait for Becca to respond. He scanned the faces of the people surrounding the inconsiderate egomaniac, especially those unlucky enough to sit behind her, where the glowing ring light was an unquestionable distraction. Secretly, he wanted nothing more than to see an usher confiscate her ring light or an annoyed Bon Jovi fan grab it and smash it at her feet. Instead, he watched everyone around her act like she wasn’t there, which Cameron chalked up as par for the course in a society where people are routinely attacked for standing up for what’s obviously right. Phones, selfie sticks, and ring lights have no place in a music venue that requires only a set of working ears, and yet here they are, including three or four more ring lights on the other side of the arena.
Just as Bon Jovi began singing the chorus of “It’s My Life”—their big comeback hit from 2000—Cameron decided then and there that he needed more out of life than a full-time corporate job and a part-time girlfriend. Once again, the irony of the song title didn’t elude him. Deep down, Cameron knew he saw the world accurately, and from what he could gather, most people—especially the younger generations—were blindly marching toward the edge of a precipice with their faces glued to screens that distract, dull, and commandeer their minds. Social media is the single greatest propaganda and mind control machine ever unleashed on mankind, and they can’t see it. Cameron felt he had to do something—anything to wake them up from their half-dead stupor, reminding them that there’s more to life than a steady diet of trivial, often insidious, news and information.
Better Off picks up Cameron’s story two years after the Bon Jovi concert.
-Chuck Trunks
“This work was written independently by the author without the use of generative AI.”
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